Saturday, 17 October 2009

Oh god. *hides* please be gentle. :(

This is just traumatizing! I have absolutely no idea if this is readable to anyone else than me.



7 comments:

  1. Haha yes ... I think though you need to make the glasses when she puts them back on her face, even MORE prominent.... maybe they can have a pik tint? Or outlined in a glowing white?

    And she dissapears a bit in the image .... maybe surround her in a bit of a white halo or something?

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  2. Yeah. Rich said there were focusing issues with the last panel.. Need to figure out how to put more contrast on her in potatoshop.

    this is such a sharp learning curve...

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  3. Drew was looking at it and he didn't even notice that that girl in the back was the main character - until I pointed it out. He thought we were looking at the scene throuh her eyes ... which brings me to something else ... maybe leave her out completely, and put the last scene as if seen through her glasses maybe? Maybe in lens shaped panels?

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  4. Sometimes I like to explore around panels, so I don't mind the main character blurred up with the background...

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  5. and it was a transition from the modern times to steampunk-ness, so it followed through..

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  6. Would be a bit too late to change the panels themselves. I'm just doing the finishing touches really. So will have to suck up any faults. :(

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